tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post1241055575111992680..comments2023-05-15T03:35:02.849-07:00Comments on GajabKhopdi: Chrome DustGajabKhopdihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16901761222312719098noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-2852405275871101172007-05-28T21:47:00.000-07:002007-05-28T21:47:00.000-07:00Just read your story. Nice!Just read your story. Nice!Vinod Kharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05329996665270601782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-7527555248641318122007-05-21T03:36:00.000-07:002007-05-21T03:36:00.000-07:00Much has been told by yr frds.. abt the quality n...Much has been told by yr frds.. abt the quality n grammar n suggestions.. so u dont need any more i suppose.<BR/>well the story was heart touching n you have been successful in transfering the emotions from yr ownself to yr writing n to the readers. well individuals may have varied comments on the type.<BR/>But i wud always ignore the minor loops which have negligible importance where expressionmonika guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08276019295850667362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-69583965123894911272007-04-30T06:41:00.000-07:002007-04-30T06:41:00.000-07:00ab agli post agle saal karega kya?ab agli post agle saal karega kya?Chintan Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06814334717822763335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-40801218340089869142007-04-14T05:50:00.000-07:002007-04-14T05:50:00.000-07:00Awesome!! A genuine effort and thanks to you I hav...Awesome!! A genuine effort and thanks to you I have read a nicely written story after a long time. I appreciate the thought process that you could see something different in a beggar scribbling on a paper which a normal person would easily run through in a fast paced life. Hope you never fell short of a subject and keep writting something as thought provoking as the "Chrome Dust".<BR/><BR/>As an Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06055837167282373798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-33694926280369479942007-04-12T08:01:00.000-07:002007-04-12T08:01:00.000-07:00hey well i can afford to say that the verse made ...hey well i can afford to say that the verse made the prose look worse..am i getting punny :)..hehe btw jokes apart ignoring the rough edges the prose was smooth and did succeed in touching the emotional chords...<BR/><BR/>( "stump like legs." "12 o’ clock midnight" "few coins gave it company" phewhh!! spare me for my nitpicking effort...but i felt these phrases needed to be smoothed out..)<BR/>Garam Bheja Fryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08206123866311977597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-86352270993872441082007-04-10T09:11:00.000-07:002007-04-10T09:11:00.000-07:00ha ha ha! dont worry guys, i was testing how good ...ha ha ha! dont worry guys, i was testing how good i m at expressing sentiments....the next one is surely gonna be a different genre!GajabKhopdihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16901761222312719098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-47868075176738158452007-04-10T06:27:00.000-07:002007-04-10T06:27:00.000-07:00The correlated poem is excellent ...Beauty and Ugl...The correlated poem is excellent ...Beauty and Ugliness are the one and the same thing at some point down the pipe because both of these have the capacity of making a long lasting effect on the cerebrum...<BR/>Good work dude....!!!<BR/>But i dont understand what is ur tension in life...??? why is ur mind filled with such thoughts...???Sayan Bhattacharjee...https://www.blogger.com/profile/08531225641449935004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31167603.post-65396192686562059042007-04-09T20:44:00.000-07:002007-04-09T20:44:00.000-07:00Did such a thing really happen with you? In any ca...Did such a thing really happen with you? In any case, the story sounds very metaphorical. It has your touch from the start(a mix of philosophy and storytelling) for sure. Though I am impressed by any poem that rhymes, I must say that the poem in your story stirred some thoughts by the message it was trying to convey. Besides, yaar thodi khushi waali kahaniyan likh diya kar, mein waise hi senti hoChintan Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06814334717822763335noreply@blogger.com